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Autorob
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Nice script... I'm not sure about the 'eveyone goes home' ending (i always prefer the more open-ended plots anyway), but otherwise, not bad.
on balance, i prefer the comic that denyer linked to, but still a cracking read.
I say three and-a-half of five stars, for you sir!
 
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Thunderwing
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| Autorob wrote: | Nice script... I'm not sure about the 'eveyone goes home' ending (i always prefer the more open-ended plots anyway), but otherwise, not bad.
on balance, i prefer the comic that denyer linked to, but still a cracking read.
I say three and-a-half of five stars, for you sir!
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Thanks, I wrote this some time ago, and looking at it now, I'd probably change a lot. THe Quickstrike/Inferno scene is a bit derivative and maybe should be cut or shortened. In retrospect, I thought I did pretty well with BW-esque dialogue and getting the characters right.
It seems like A LOT of the BW eps ends with "Everyone goes home" so I probably ended it that way cause it seemed the way it should be.
Thanks for the review!
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